autobiography essay
need help to just correct my essay and add more detail to it
MLA style
Coming to The US
In 2010, after I
had just finished high school in Al hafuf in Eastern Saudi Arabia, I tried to
look for a good university near my family. I wanted to stay nearby so I could
be with my family and friends all the time, but I didn’t find one that I
wanted. The universities in Saudi Arabia were not what I was looking for, which
was a good education system with strong major options, and school activities.
In edition, because my father had studied in the USA, he advised me to go and
study in the US. This is the most exiting and good time in my life. Also it has
changed me a lot since I moved here.
At that time, I
started to look for school and a good city in the United State. And I was
really nerves because all what I knew about the USA was from the TV. I also had
never left Saudi Arabia without my family before. I sent my paper to three
schools in a deferent part in the US. I was finally accepted in Wichita State
University here in Wichita. I started packing my stuff and buy things that I
will need here. Ten days before my flight, when I woke up that day, there was
smell of my favorite dish that my mom made it for me. I was so happy and also
sad because I will miss my mom so much.
As for when I got
to the US, because I had to go to Washington DC to do my scholarship paper, I
was really amazed of the views and the big buildings. Moreover, the people are
always busy and the city doesn’t go to sleep at all. I thought that all America
just as Washington DC. I started to make some friend because many Americans are
curious to know about my country and my culture. But than I had to leave them
and move to Wichita to start going to school
In order to take
classes at WSU, I needed to learn English, so I started my WSU experience at the intensive English. The first day when I attended
intensive English classes, I saw people from all over the world. It was really
fun experience to have friends from a different country and learn about many
parts of the world such as foods holydays, and games.I started to learn English
and about American culture. At first, my English wasn’t good, but my English
got better step by step. I also changed a lot of my bad habit and bet better
person.
What I have
changed on my life style, first, in Saudi Arabia, I had never exercised and we
had never play sports, but hereI start to go to the gym and do some sports. I
did things that I had never done before such as camping, fishing, and some
hikes. Now I’m likely opened minded and out going. I also have a lot friend
males and females from all over the world. I feel happy, confidence, and proud
of myself.
It’s clear this
experience effected me in many ways. It also will affect my future life. Coming
to the US was a good decision form. I have learned a lot since I moved here.
And I will keep learning every single moment.
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